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  1. Fandomjumper173 (Guest) on Chapter 5 Sun 26 Oct 2025 04:44PM UTC

    While I enjoy the story, i.. kinda think it could've had more to it.?
    Like, I was just sorta expecting maybe Luffy or at least the Strawhats would try to reason with Nika midst battle after hearing that it 'wanted to be loved' too.
    Maybe it's just me, but Nika being trapped in the dial feels like it's his worst nightmare as it would probably remind him of the times he's escaped the W.G in the form of a fruit and was helpless the entire time, not to mention he was alone for most of those 800 years, so him and Luffy could've had something in common in that sense.

    Either way, fic was still super good, I loved the concept👍

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    1. Impxssibl on Chapter 5 Wed 05 Nov 2025 12:26AM UTC

      Yeah, I know what you mean…though to be fair I wrote this when I was 12 😭 im sorry if it’s cringe or smth lol

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