Comment on Method acting

  1. soleil_la_lune (Guest) on Chapter 2 Sat 01 Nov 2025 06:19PM UTC

    This entire experience was a catastrophic failure of narrative execution and a spectacular mismanagement of my limited reading time, which, let me be clear, is a resource I can never get back, and the sheer audacity of posting something this fundamentally underbaked and aggressively amateurish suggests a level of self-delusion that is genuinely concerning for anyone attempting creative endeavors, because this isn't just "not good," this is actively, aggressively BAD in a way that feels intentional, a deliberate affront to the very concept of engaging storytelling, and the entire structure felt less like a carefully considered piece of writing and more like a fever dream typed out onto a sticky keyboard at 3 AM without any thought given to pacing, emotional resonance, or even basic grammar, making every single sentence a struggle to parse and ultimately resulting in a reading experience comparable to trying to navigate a dense fog while blindfolded, where every step is a stumble and the final destination is total, utter confusion, and I spent a significant portion of this reading time wondering why the plot points connected in such a jarring, nonsensical fashion, or why the characterizations felt so wildly off-base and fundamentally misunderstood, even in a non-specific, purely conceptual sense, as if the author hadn't just missed the point, but had actively run in the complete opposite direction from where the point was even located, leading to a pervasive sense of profound disappointment that lingers like a bad smell, a deeply unpleasant lingering sensation that confirms this entire endeavor was not a kind or pleasant piece of fiction, but a hostile environment of confusing syntax and baffling structural choices, and I NEED to emphasize that the level of quality here is so abysmal that it actively detracts from the overall fandom space, dragging down the average standard by its sheer weight of incompetence, and anyone who tells you this is salvageable is lying, because this is a foundational mess that needs to be completely scraped and started over from a place of actual, diligent effort, because the lack of polish is frankly ASTOUNDING, leading me to conclude that this was not a nice thing to read, nor was it remotely good, and I wish I had stopped reading about 400 words ago, seriously.

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