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1. adhdrew on Chapter 2 Fri 26 Dec 2025 05:09PM UTC

   

   i really liked the sh, i mean, it's something i've struggled with and i really liked how you wrote it so anything with it would be awesome ! and something i had in mind was maybe something abt falling out of love? like danny loses feelings for drew or something

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   2. 1. adhdrew on Chapter 2 Fri 26 Dec 2025 09:08PM UTC

         

         that's totally okay dw !!

         im not good with titles sorry but maybe look up the lyrics of some songs you think fit the general theme and go from there ? and i don't have any ideas rn but anything you write would be very good !

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      2. 1. fyodorsNo1rat on Chapter 2 Fri 26 Dec 2025 09:18PM UTC

            

            Oh yeahh, thats a good idea!!!

            Tyyy ehehe <3

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         2. fyodorsNo1rat on Chapter 2 Sat 27 Dec 2025 11:52PM UTC

            

            Yo should i do it in second person or not (i cant make my own decisions xoxo)

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         3. 1. adhdrew on Chapter 2 Sun 28 Dec 2025 12:22AM UTC

               

               i would say no but if you think it's best for the story then go for it !

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            2. 1. fyodorsNo1rat on Chapter 2 Sun 28 Dec 2025 09:09PM UTC

                  

                  Okayayayya :3

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