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1. dahllaz on Chapter 3 Thu 02 Nov 2017 08:01PM UTC

   

   Oooooh, what an awesome continuation! I'm so intrigued by what might be in store, with the slight changes you've weaved into the story that keeps a reader on their toes. Excellent work and just a damn fine story/chapter.

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2. 1. hawkwing_lb on Chapter 3 Fri 03 Nov 2017 12:08AM UTC

      

      Thank you! I feel that my MC might be a bit paranoid, a bit more politically savvy than the game lets you be, and inclined to give Dorian -- when she'd meet him -- a punch in the face. (I really like Dorian. But damn, the boy doesn't recognise his racism.)

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