I'm on mobile, but if the form is any indication then this and "When Fate Doesn't Allow" are indeed written as poetry. (Correct me if I am wrong!)
There’s a gross inattention here though. People aren't seeing your two works.
Aaaaand, I think I know why: you lack the crucial, parent, all-encompassing tag "Princess Bubblegum/Marceline". Note the lack of an ampersand, yeah.
Allow me to stroke my ego lmao:
Like a thirsty animal did I only arrive; you've nearly deserted your those Two here. In my desperation to quench the thirst for these Two I searched the tag "Marceline" in F/F only.
Almost hopelessly really.
But then! I found This! The Other One!
Your writing is far from dry. And I find myself satisfied.
So I can say with confidence that you'd been overlooked.
(End ego-stroking.)
Um, you should add that tag though! Err, if you wanna. When people search the tag it may be in order of 'Date Updated' thoooo.
Gotta wonder, you some kinda pro or aspiring writer?
I don't wanna put any extra on you, but do you plan to write more Bubbline? I appreciate your work! More of this kind of writing, or specifically whatever YOU do, would be friggin wonderful.
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Southern_Metalhead Sat 30 Dec 2017 07:39AM UTC
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