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  1. Mysecretfanmoments Mon 23 Feb 2015 02:32PM UTC

    GOSH I knew when you started talking about writing an iwaoi that it was going to be a treat but 10k words of slow-build sweetness with the right amount of angst and love and kissing JUST--ahhh. ahhhhh. *slowly melts*

    I swear my stomach flipped at least five times after Hajime finally kissed him. ESPECIALLY at “I’m probably four years too late for that, huh?” oh god I DIED. and then came back to life at Oikawa's happy crying. It's weird because I was totally sure Oikawa was still in love with him but at the same time I was terrified somehow so kudos on that. X_X

    I was a little surprised at Kunimi being the only other character in this but it totally fit having someone who hangs back and watches be that "hey here's an uncomfortable truth" guy.

    Two things: there's a typo where it said "abominable muscles" instead of "abdominal muscles" and also: ((there was a difference between whispering compliments in Hajime’s ear when they cuddled and literally reciting him a manifesto of everything about him that Oikawa adored while he fucked him over the arm of the couch.))) I NEED TO KNOW WHO IS FUCKING WHO HERE AND IT'S ONLY PRURIENT CURIOSITY BUT I NEED THE RIGHT MENTAL IMAGE AND I'M ASHAMED FOR ASKING I'M SORRY.

    LASTLY after that embarrassing question: I was thinking while reading this how nice it is to have fic authors you "trust". Like, when reading new authors it's pretty common to be a little withholding so when you find someone whose interpretations you agree with and whose style you like it's just such an amazing experience, where you can just sit back and relax and know you're in for a good ride, and you're one of those people. I hope you write lots more fic for couples I ship so I can continue to enjoy. Cx

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    1. Yuu_chi Mon 23 Feb 2015 03:01PM UTC

      oh my gosh thanks so much for pointing out that typo. There is nothing abominable about Iwa-chan's muscles - except how terrifying(andhot) they are.

      And also you've found my guilty pleasure - Oikawa topping. Just like -- there's so little of it. I just needed to contribute to the small pool of fics out there, even if it was only by one line. I'm so sorry, I can't be stopped, the future probably holds some intense smut for these two dorks from me.

      Being told I'm a trustworthy author by one of my complete favourite fic writers; god, you fucking flatter me. I can say for sure that I'm complete head over heels for your style myself, I've read probably every work you've written, I'm a giant raging fangirl. I'm super pleased you enjoyed this piece, especially considering it was like, a month ago, that I announced my plans for it. I'm sure everybody thought I was bluffing by the time this actually came out.

      Thanks so much, and you're an absolute angel (for a lot of reason, but being very good at flattery is definitely one of them) xx

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      1. Mysecretfanmoments Mon 23 Feb 2015 03:42PM UTC

        HAHAHA I am so glad you think I'm good at flattery. You are too. (Mr Fanmoments asked me why I was grinning and it was because I was reading your reply.)

        ALSO. also. *clears throat* tell me... more... about this Oikawa topping thing. and the. uh. possible plans you might have. And by "tell me" I mean "please dear god I hope you have time to write that soon because I will be all over that". I love both, but it's certainly true that the thing you see less often becomes extra special. @_@;;

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