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  1. randomperson13 Sun 22 Mar 2020 08:51AM UTC

    Very nice! Love the flowery descriptions.

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    1. NumptyPylon Sun 22 Mar 2020 09:17AM UTC

      Thank you so much! That's why I was worried it might be pretentious, lol. I don't usually do flowery descriptions, because I can't figure out a way for them to not slow down the narrative, so this was an experiement where they WERE the narrative. I'm happy to hear you liked it :)

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