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  1. DSpaceZ on Chapter 3 Tue 29 Dec 2020 10:13PM UTC

    -You know, Adrien final words was something new to me. Usually in these kinds of bashing fics, its usually Marinette who has the final word, either because she forced the other to leave or because she left. Its kind of nice seeing Adrien warning that she is going to regret this.
    Every time i see Adrien comment on not making Lila akumatised, i keep thinking of the counter argument 'WHAT ABOUT YOUR ENTIRE FREAKING CLASS WHEN THEY FOUND OUT SHE LIED, YOU DUMBASS!? DO I NEED TO REMIND YOU THERE ARE TWO AKUMAS IN YOUR CLASS WITH THE POWER OF MIND CONTROL AND ONE THAT CAN LITERALLY ERASE YOU!?'
    -Its kind of interesting what you did here since... the class doesn't exactly know Lila lied about everything. Yes, they might know she lied about Marinette stealing her designs
    -It saddens me a bit to see Juleka also receive the bashing. Out of the entire class with the exception of Adrien and Marinette, it seems Juleka would be the most logical one to find out Lila was lying because of Luka. Just one meeting and the guy would probably figure her out, or you know, the fact that she is a big fan of Jagged Stone and doesn't found odd him owning a cat was never mentioned.
    Im kind of interested in finding out about the rest of the characters. Luka most likely is roasting the hell out of Juleka and Kagami is a double edged sword... pun not intended.

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    1. SuperPsychoNutcase on Chapter 3 Fri 01 Jan 2021 03:48AM UTC

      -I try to do things a little different. Usually Marinette's feelings for Adrien and her promise to him have kept her from calling out Lila's bs. Since the dress was already bought by an A-list client with a two week deadline, Mari had no other option than to tell Clara. If it had been a sketchbook, which is often the case in many of these salt fics, Marinette would have swallowed her anger for Adrien and got a new one. The destruction of a commissioned project forced Mari to seek legal aide or watch her future career crash and burn to nothing.

      -Most of Mari's classmates have known her since childhood and have seen her sketching new designs as they popped into her head. Rose, Juleka, and Ivan have seen how angry she got when their work was plagiarized by XY. They know she wouldn't steal someone else's work.

      -"The only thing necessary for the triumph of evil is for good men to do nothing." Juleka is smart. She knows Marinette would never steal credit for someone else's work. She knew this, yet Juleka didn't defend her when Lila lied. She sat there and heard her classmates plotting to destroy the dress. She didn't call them out, she didn't report it to a teacher, and she didn't warn Marinette. Knowing Mari is innocent and feeling guilty for not speaking up does not make up for the fact the the dress has been destroyed. She has a chance for redemption, but it will be a long road to forgiveness and an even longer one to regain trust. :3

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      1. DSpaceZ on Chapter 3 Fri 01 Jan 2021 06:55PM UTC

        Great! Can't see what you do with the story!

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