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1. The Daleks Advocate (LauraDove) on Chapter 7 Wed 30 Dec 2020 04:26AM UTC

   

   I noticed a few typos in passing:

   with the only noticeably sound being when Rusty brief it turned it's eye stalk back to look out into the void: I think it should be the only noticeable sound being when Rusty briefly turned its eye stalk

   Journey replied as she focused on looking out for any Dalek ships am again which quickly destroyed her willpower: the am seems out of place, should it be another word?

   DEACTIVATE THEM AND BEING THEM BACK: it should be BRING.

   As for the chapter itself, aww, Journey is a sore loser but it's so cute that she's starting to find similarities between Rusty and Kai. I love how calm and indifferent Rusty is indeed when he wins. :-D

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2. 1. JTR01 on Chapter 7 Wed 30 Dec 2020 08:32AM UTC

      

      Thanks for pointing out the typos.

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