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  1. CarnaSnow on Chapter 10 Wed 30 Aug 2023 12:23AM UTC

    I was so sure I'd left a comment here given how much I liked it! In any case, I recently saw this fic being mentioned so here I am again because God i have A Lot of Feelings about this.

    I love the writing style! It's like a play, or a continuous recording, like there was at the beginning and throughout the fic. I expected it to stop when we got to 'real life', but the style was the same :D And you handle it so well!

    The mystery! God! I am still so. Confused?? What's up with Yu Ziyuan? Jiang Fengman is as neglectful as ever unsurprisingly, and seems to be the most out of the loop. But Yanli being sort of in on it surprised me! Also wow she lies so easily?? Lmao that was so good. Aw but they're really trying to help Jiang Cheng :') Despite not knowing why he killed her, they're still willing to help.

    Jin Ling is so valid. Such complicated feelings for a 10 years old :(

    Okay but you've got me completely hooked?? I am absolutely not the type to immediately figure out a murder mystery but usually I've got at least some kind of idea, but this time everything looks like it could make sense! Jiang Cheng and Madam Yu seem to be the only ones to really know the truth in its entirety but well. One's dead so that leaves only Jiang Cheng.

    Song Lan conducting the interviews and just *knowing* that somethings fishy is so fun to read. Poor guy's just trying to know the truth but Jiang Cheng is not making it easy for him lol

    Idk if you're planning on continuing this, but I would absolutely be there for any other chapters that might come! Thank you for such wonderful writing <3

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    1. KayllanBreak on Chapter 10 Wed 06 Sep 2023 02:35AM UTC

      Awww thank you so much for the sweet comment!!!! Made my day :') I've just gotten the time to start working on writing again (popping in every now and again to check where I left off lol), look forward to it! Fingers crossed by late september I'll be back on that wagon.

      Also >fic being mentioned 👀 as they say in the white collar world, I hope just good things!

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