Sky is feeling GUILTY AS FUCK!! He'd been on watch and popped down to go get Warriors some food. Awful timing on his part, but it would've happened inevitably LOL. Cia is persistent.
I'm glad you liked the transitions! They're... one of my favorite parts about writing these kinds of fics, ngl. You're correct in saying The Point is to disorient the reader. For Warriors, everything is passing in a quick blur and blending into each other. We're seeing it from that perspective. And I'm really happy you liked it HAHA I'm told they throw people off a bit!
Okay so. The intent was, indeed, Time just ready to kick some serious ass. But yikes Warriors just losing his marbles (further) would've been fun. He's already out of it enough, it could've gotten worse LOL
Thank you so much for reading and commenting!! It means a lot (even if I'm horribly slow to respond 😅)
Comment on scopophobia; fear of being watched
qar Thu 04 Jan 2024 10:38AM UTC
Comment Actions