I like the premise of this story but while rereading chapter I noticed some really bad anachronisms
Computers for personal use didn't really start to come out until early 80's (First one was august 1981 and had no modem and potters were in hiding, first dialup boards were after Harry's parents were dead with AOL not until 1985). You had Sirius refer to google which wasn't invented until 1998 (3 years after this story).
If you ever edit this chapter you might want to replace that section with card catalog type system
Actually, I changed the timeline of Harry Potter with my story. I definitely should make that more clear. But, I moved up the timeline so that all the events of Harry Potter take place a few years into the future. It's like what DayDreamer did with their story "Let's Try Again" when they had a lot of the events of their story take place in the early 2000s. I am doing the same thing with my story.
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