This was an amazing first chapter. I loved how you applied Spring Broke and Ozzie's in there too. I also loved the internal conflict that Verosika has; it helped me feel for her, almost making me forget my overall skepticism and distrust I have over her.
I never gave much thought into what Verosika's family is like, mainly because I always assume the worst given the track records of most parents in HB but I like how you did it here.
Looking forward to the next chapter and it putting the anti Blitzo party into question as a whole since that will always be questionable in my mind, whether you like Verosika or hate her.
I figured should include the events of spring broken and Ozzie’s while they are mostly the same, verosika have very different mindset.
I always she have good parents, A bit over supportive and affectionate. Although with verosika as a single mother, do make them act bit more serious. Also I thought verosika having two moms would be different.
Next chapter coming in like 2 weeks, I will show why verosika ever thought the parties were a good idea? And blitz slowly learning about the pain he caused verosika and discovered his son of course.
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Ghostwriter434 on Chapter 1 Sun 16 Feb 2025 01:58AM UTC
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