"Since that fateful day, when tragedy struck their home with devastating force, she had not been the same. " Second paragraph and we already have a mystery.
“I will sell your properties on the Elysium Peninsula. Also your ships, your jewels, and all of your suits" does that include Sitron?
"a devoted husband. Since when, Richard? Since you put a ring on her finger" too much tension regarding her so I'm guessing Hans' childhood crush?
"just lost another baby. " That's sad
I knew she was going to make a dramatic entrance to save the day!
"Really, no hard feelings. Exile, prison—whatever you want. Put me on that ship without supplies, even. Life imprisonment? Fantastic" I think he would do fine in the ship with no supplies, actually.
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kin_yo on Chapter 1 Wed 30 Apr 2025 07:32AM UTC
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