Comment on The sons of fire and silence

  1. RedWhiteBunnies on Chapter 14 Wed 23 Jul 2025 09:47AM UTC

    I am a bit confuse with the story telling because it keep skipping in small scenes

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    1. Rkyaoi on Chapter 14 Wed 23 Jul 2025 11:56AM UTC

      Which secenes sweetie.

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      1. Neko Baka (Guest) on Chapter 14 Wed 12 Nov 2025 03:28PM UTC

        I think what they're trying to say is that they're confused because the scenes keep changing every few paragraphs, you could use a few symbols between paragraphs to seperate different scenes! Like putting "***" in the middle of the two paragraphs or smthng.

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