ok so THE NOSEBLEED SCENE IS SO GOOD I HAD NEVER THOUGHT OF THIS BEFORE BUT omg the smell of his blood in his mouth wafting out on every breath and just driving andrew crazy is such a fun idea THIS IS SUCH A FUN IDEA!!! i can't get over how sexy "julius feeding andrew by pressing his tongue against his" is, omg, im going to think about this 4 THE REST OF MY LIFE i love it gahh what a creative n hot idea !!!
ANYWAY the bathroom incident needs to be written at some point and gosh do i wanna, WE SHALL SEE .... i love that andrew wont lick the tiles that's so him, drinking blood but still disgusted by the germy floor what a dweeb... i love how julius loves the thrill of almost being found out, which comes back into play right here in the library!!! andrew's childish little "i don't want to be quick" making julius tremble is the most fantastic thing, i get a thrill every time i read that, and i'm so glad andrew gives in to his hunger and just goes for it ehehehe feed that boy !!!!!!
this whole part wtf "his voice is rough and dry. he sounds like he needs a drink. julius shudders. “you gotta be quiet this time,” he mumbles and takes the book out of julius’ hands." LAYING DOWN THE LAW ugh i love when he's all forward and dominant like this GOSH WHO KNEW MY SON COULD ACTUALLY BE SEXY thats the magic of vampirism.... and he goes straight for his collar of course nnghfg i love it. and HERE WE GO, andrew grazing his teeth over his neck before biting is so sensual and Good, and the way you describe the teeth going in with a "pop" is so lewd lmao i love itt... and gosh then he's drinking like a maniac as usual, having to pull away briefly to breathe because he's so damn eager he can hardly handle himself...
i love your description of giving blood, "transferring his fever from one body to another feels like pouring milk into coffee or washing a paint brush in clean water—it seeps through flesh and blood, coloring the inside with gentle clouds of smoke." TRANSFERRING HIS FEVER !!! fuck what a lovely description of the melding of their bloodstreams and bodies, this donation of life and heat im so .... GOSH
and i actually think the greatest part of this whole blood drinking scene (besides the very end) is how many times they change positions ?? i feel like every time i write blood drinking theyre kinda in the same position the whole time but you have them standing, sitting, lying down, and it's so GOOD and sexy the way these reflect their varying states... "julius feels beautiful, although tired. his knees wobble where he stands and he’s close to collapsing against the shelf behind him." guhhhh and they sink down together, andrew's mouth still on him, and he's so gentle now "like he always [is] whenever julius has to sit down" i love that he's learned to adapt to julius' needs, it tells a lot of their bond and their trust... ahhh
and julius is such a BLOOD SLUT lmao trying to get him to speed up again and ravage his throat, and andrew complying if only for just a little bit, eager to get more of julius inside him but still aware of their situation, that julius needs to STAY QUIET (and oh how i love julius' hand clamping over andrew's when it silences him) and also how he knows when he's weakening and he needs to lie down... goshh..... pULLING HIM ACROSS THE FLOOR BY THE HIPS IS THE HOTTEST THING it's such a perverse corruption of tenderness and objectivity im so ?? GOSHH !!!! covering the wound, his shirt riding up OOOOOO BOY and him shivering and TWITCHING, "the pulse in his throat broken against his sternum" this is the hottest shit ive ever read hoe
i cant believe he doesn't know andrew's killed before lmao jesus ... he has no idea. but omg he wants MORE STILL even when andrew says he'll die, he just feels so cold without him on him but this is still just a meal to andrew AHH they dont crave each other in the same way and its so ... good. and messed up. im running out of space again fuck
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