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2023-04-23
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A good vigilante? (Haven't seen one of those before)

Chapter 5: Ouch

Notes:

Hey! This is to anyone reading this fic, I am here to sincerely apologise!

I wrote this story because my older siblings was into the DSMP fandom, but truthfully? The characterisation of these characters are literally my original characters. I feel really bad about this, especially because I've decided to re-write it and although I've only done one chapter, I realise that at this point what I probably need to do is make a new work and call it what it is.

OC lore..

This chapter is old and unedited, again I truly apologise, looking for this and realising how badly I wrote the characters, as well as how problematic some of them are, has made me decide to move the re-write to an original work.

Honestly? The writing here feels awful to me. I'll still post the- 100?? Word scrap from my notes, again I'm sorry but reading through the old stuff made me realise that I want this story to have an actual life (by whoch I mean giving the characters names and backstories and not having to change things to fit in with the DSMP fandom)

I love you all so, so much!! Thank you all for this, I can't believe that so many people have seen this story, let alone the people who liked it!

I want to apologise again, but I feel like saying it again would make me sound disingenuous.

Thank you.

(See the end of the chapter for more notes.)

Chapter Text

Naturally, he tripped over rubble and fell face first into concrete dust. Fucking awesome.

He buried his head in his hands and decided he was just going to leave. How? (I dunno) Next thing he knew, he was at home. Weird, seeing as he had been just at-.

Huh that was weird! What was he thinking about? He thought for a moment then shrugged, not his problem! If it was important he'd remember!

He sat on the carpet. Patches stared at him as though he was weird, rude!, and trotted past him over to the cat tree. 

He got up hurt at the rejection and opened the door. He left the house to go get some ice cream. The cleric greeted him oddly cheerfully.

Weird.. he didn't know her he js walked past her every day he greeted her back, confused, and then ,obed on. Sapnap wanted not cheap ice cream right? He checked the prices on each.

None of them looked cheap at all.. he js lookd for the brand he'd seen most in the freezer payed and left. He got a weird deja-vu feeling and he went back home.

He felt like he was being watched. Crepey.. 

He got back and tossed the ice cream in the freezer.

He swung open the door of his bedroom and flopped onto his bed. 

He hadn't done much today but he was feeling oddly exhausted, like he'd done work.

He went to sleep ignoring the feeling.

Notes:

This part isn't as old as the last chapter, but nit really new either sorry. It's very obvious that I'm British, it'll be even more obvious as the actual characters will be placed in Wales when I make the original work and post it.